Friday Flames

Sizzling heat. Clenched teeth. Desire beyond reason...or rationale.

It's not easy to write a scene that captures your reader's imagination and attention. To hold them in a grip so tight...they go up in flames.

Today, I want you to share your Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader...up in flames.

It doesn't have to be graphic, tension can increase the pounding of our blood. Lead us to the moment, keep us hanging by a thread.

To start it off, here's an unedited portion from my upcoming release.
 

REMEDY MAKER

"I feel so… hot inside." She managed to rasp out.

"Gamóto, woman. Don't say shit like that." No sooner had the threat left his mouth, when his slick fingers breached her folds and entered the slippery realm.

Euphoria of him fondling the one place she needed it most drove her hips to wriggle and throat to moan. He leaned back to shove up her t-shirt in a wadded mass above her breasts. Arousal and cool morning air tightened her nipples. She welcomed his crushing weight, feeling secure and safe beneath him.

Rhycious' eyes locked on his latest discovery, his mouth hung slack. "My gods, Patience. You're so—" 


His words broke off and his mouth came crashing down on her breast. His warm lips took a distended point deep into his mouth. The heat and sucking motion moved in time to the fingers pushing insistently between her legs. Thighs spread wide by his big body, he had total access to her. She almost cried from the want of him.

Okay people! I showed you mine - now it's your turn. Don't forget to leave your book title so interested parties can rush  out and buy it :)

Friday Flames...

 

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Some of the hottest selling romance books feature a scene of scorching love. The words burning your page (or eReader), and set your heart to pounding.

Today, I want you to share your Smoking Hot scene, the one that sends the reader...up in flames.

Keep it short, meaning don't post the whole chapter! Just the drool-worthy highlights.

To start it off, here's an unedited portion from my upcoming release.

REMEDY MAKER

 

The top of his belt met her fingers.

The male shifted his stance but didn't move to stop her traveling hand. "Yeah? Go on."

As instructed she went on, caressing her fingers lower. "There's a move to change the guards, so to speak." 

The tip of his semi-erect penis leaped in his pants when her fingers made contact with the head. His breath blew in a hard huff and she jumped on the submissive reaction. Pennelope smiled, smelling the faint citrus scent of his cologne. This meeting was easier than she thought, she figured he'd put up more of a fight. But she was an ancient female Troll, and the males…they're all the same.

Leaning in, she pressed her breasts against his chest and filled her hand with the fullness inside his trouser. Slow strokes up and down. 

Her lips whispered against his ear. "We're going to be good together, you and I. A great team." His length grew, hardened with her words, and her excitement increased with his. "I can hardly wait to get started."

And it just gets HOTTER from there! As always, I welcome each comment and look forward to your posts!